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Tanielle I like how you used a lot interesting vocabulary in your poem like sleepless, recreation and magnificent. I also liked how you used a lot of topic vocabulary like Stack - em, Moo - off, Abseiling, Dorms and Sea - life. Next time I think you could add more detail in your poem so other people reading this can imagine what Camp Merc was like.
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